1. Johnny Morreale
2. The writer's view on the AP exam and what people should expect and suggestions to do well in the class.
3. "A teacher’s job is to help you learn, not to present you with impossible information and let you fail. If you don’t go in for tutoring when you’re struggling with a topic, you’re digging your own grave."
4. yes
5. No they stuck firm to their opinion.
6. no
7. 2nd person
1. Alaina Galasso
2. The theatre program at Vanderbilt High School has added a senior directing program.
3. "At first I was terrified at the prospect of having to teach other how to act, which I something I can’t do myself, but then I decided that maybe doing just that would make me a better technician. "
4. yes
5. No, they stated their opinion clearly by sticking to one point and not going back and forth.
6. no
7. 1st person
1. Jude Benham
2. A prime candidate for the Texas Board of Education is an blatant homophobic and Islamophobic.
3. "I should not have to express how rude and misinformed this statement is"
4. no
5. They were very clear on their opinion and did not differ from it at all.
6. yes
7. 1st and 3rd person
Friday, April 15, 2016
Personal Essays
1. Use a wide frame when writing so if people have never experienced the situation they can at least relate.
2. Put the topic into context so that the reader can gain perception on a small and wide scale.
3. Three Suggestions:
- You don't need to use that many facts, ore opinions, but if you do they make sure that they are correct.
- Hook the reader with a strong quote, question, a strong statement, or a metaphor.
- Write using all senses to convey ideas.
Wednesday, April 13, 2016
Opinions Writing Preview Activity
Apple refuses to violate privacy of users
1. N/A
2. The FBI wanting to violate the privacy of all Apple Users by urging Apple to create a new software update so that the FBI can unlock a terrorist's phone.
3. "Here the rick isn't worth the potential consequences, which would be much worse for the country and all iPhone users."
4. no
5. No, because every circumstance was explained thoroughly and the writer made sure to only take one stance, in their note.
6. no
7. 3rd person in article and 1st in the "Editor's Note"
Drug dog investigations have students feeling as though their rights are being violated at school
1. Granger Coats
2. Students rights are being violated as they are being punished improperly for cases that aren't even felonies.
3."That's why I believe the DAEP should be a punishment saved only for severe cases such as students considered a theta to the school, the well-being of students, or themselves. "
4. Yes
5. No, they are firm with their opinion and make a clear statement.
6. yes
7. 1st person
Social media, back at it again
1. Alicia Molina
2. The editor talks about the "Damn Daniel" video clips and how they have affected people.
3. "I thought the video was funny but after a while it was starting to get annoying. "
4. yes
5. No, they make sure to address the topic with out wavering their opinion.
6. yes
7. 1st person
Beyonce causes controversy
1. Fuaad Ajaz
2. This editor brings to light the pop-star Beyonce and how her new song, Formation, regarding the "Black Lives Matter" movement, has received so much backlash.
3. " If someone goes and shoots up a movie theatre and they are white, they are labeled "Mentally ill" and if someone of color did the exact same thing, they are terrorists who receive the death penalty."
4. no
5. No, the editor stayed firm on his belief that people of color are always treated differently.
6. yes
7. 3rd person
Is the AP Word History test worth it?
1. Mia Barbosa
2. The article focuses on the benefits of the AP test and how cost effective it is.
3. "I think that more tests like this need to be offered to students so that way they can prepare for the future better and save money."
4. no
5. No, the editor didn't propose any other circumstances that would contradict their opinion.
6. no
7. 1st person
A. I think that major differences between a hard story and an opinion story is that there are less quotes from other people and more factual quotes from primary sources that support the writer's opinions, the writer can write in 1st person, and the paragraphs can be longer, versus short choppy paragraphs with less detail.
B. I don't think that there are many photos on this page because the writers are just stating their opinion through words, so images are not needed to support their opinion.
C. I think that it would be good to write a piece on the amount of money that sorts are given versus the fine arts at Bowie, unfair favoritism that the teachers, clubs, and organizations at Bowie do, and the murder of the dance student at UT and how college students and anyone in general can help protect themselves in legal ways.
1. N/A
2. The FBI wanting to violate the privacy of all Apple Users by urging Apple to create a new software update so that the FBI can unlock a terrorist's phone.
3. "Here the rick isn't worth the potential consequences, which would be much worse for the country and all iPhone users."
4. no
5. No, because every circumstance was explained thoroughly and the writer made sure to only take one stance, in their note.
6. no
7. 3rd person in article and 1st in the "Editor's Note"
Drug dog investigations have students feeling as though their rights are being violated at school
1. Granger Coats
2. Students rights are being violated as they are being punished improperly for cases that aren't even felonies.
3."That's why I believe the DAEP should be a punishment saved only for severe cases such as students considered a theta to the school, the well-being of students, or themselves. "
4. Yes
5. No, they are firm with their opinion and make a clear statement.
6. yes
7. 1st person
Social media, back at it again
1. Alicia Molina
2. The editor talks about the "Damn Daniel" video clips and how they have affected people.
3. "I thought the video was funny but after a while it was starting to get annoying. "
4. yes
5. No, they make sure to address the topic with out wavering their opinion.
6. yes
7. 1st person
Beyonce causes controversy
1. Fuaad Ajaz
2. This editor brings to light the pop-star Beyonce and how her new song, Formation, regarding the "Black Lives Matter" movement, has received so much backlash.
3. " If someone goes and shoots up a movie theatre and they are white, they are labeled "Mentally ill" and if someone of color did the exact same thing, they are terrorists who receive the death penalty."
4. no
5. No, the editor stayed firm on his belief that people of color are always treated differently.
6. yes
7. 3rd person
Is the AP Word History test worth it?
1. Mia Barbosa
2. The article focuses on the benefits of the AP test and how cost effective it is.
3. "I think that more tests like this need to be offered to students so that way they can prepare for the future better and save money."
4. no
5. No, the editor didn't propose any other circumstances that would contradict their opinion.
6. no
7. 1st person
A. I think that major differences between a hard story and an opinion story is that there are less quotes from other people and more factual quotes from primary sources that support the writer's opinions, the writer can write in 1st person, and the paragraphs can be longer, versus short choppy paragraphs with less detail.
B. I don't think that there are many photos on this page because the writers are just stating their opinion through words, so images are not needed to support their opinion.
C. I think that it would be good to write a piece on the amount of money that sorts are given versus the fine arts at Bowie, unfair favoritism that the teachers, clubs, and organizations at Bowie do, and the murder of the dance student at UT and how college students and anyone in general can help protect themselves in legal ways.
Peer Review SoM
http://rebeccasphotojournalismblog.blogspot.com/2016/04/student-of-month-story.html
Paragraph: 50 points
5 Quotes: 25 points
Inverted Pyramid: 20 points
Extra Credit:10 points
Total: 105 points
Paragraph: 50 points
5 Quotes: 25 points
Inverted Pyramid: 20 points
Extra Credit:10 points
Total: 105 points
Monday, April 11, 2016
Huntington Story
Janice Jones was shot by her dog on
her leg, on Wednesday at 10 pm on Beach Boulevard in Barstow, California. Her
dog knocked down the handgun and the bullet was discharged when it hit the
ground.
She was treated at the
Huntington Beach Hospital. The dog taken care of by the Huntington Beach Animal
Control officers, who reported at the dog was malnourished. Jones is also
being charged for other allegations that have been placed on her at the scene.
The fired bullet hit both the car
and Jones.
"It could have been
worse. The bullet hit two inches from the gas tank," California Highway
Patrol press liason Tammy Rye said.
Jones does not have a permit
for her gun and she also has an expired license plate.
“Jones doesn’t have a permit
for the gun,” Rye said.
Jones’s Pomeranian had
cigarette burns on his forehead.
“It could have done with a
little less abuse and a few more of those pork chops,” Animal control officer
Janet Ngo said.
Earthquake
Monday morning at 8:12 am PDT, an earthquake hit San Francisco Bay area.
The earthquake struck McHenry's Auto Supply store on Plum Street, and partially
collapsed. Civilians have been injured or have died due to the earthquake.
Firefighters, police, and
American Red Cross workers who responded to the building collapse, arrived at
the scene. Some of the injured required hospitalization, and critical help.
Two civilians have been found
dead, and six are injured.
“Names of the dead are being
withheld pending notifications of families,” Hayward Fire Department public
information officer Jennifer Vu said.
The impact of the earthquake
was immensely strong. People were shocked by the hit.
“I was eating my breakfast when the room started rolling. I dove under
the table just as I heard an explosion outside and a chunk of cement flew
through my kitchen window. That’s when the screaming start across the street,”
Hayward resident Mark Beamer said.
Out of the injured civilians a few had critical cases.
"Three of the six people
injured were hurt seriously enough to require hospitalization and were
transported to Hayward General Hospital. No other serious injuries have been
reported in Hayward," said Vu.
The magnitude of the epicenter of the earthquake on the Richter scale
was 6.4, under Hayward Hills.
“It occurred on the Hayward Fault, which
runs under the hills,” Penny Gertz, a scientist from the U.S. Geological Survey
in Menlo Park said.
To help out with the casualties, many people arrived.
“Twenty-one fire personnel, 12 police and five American Red Cross
workers responded to the building collapse, with some arriving within four
minutes of the quake,” Vu said.
The earthquake not only affected many living in Hayward Hills, but also
people in neighboring cities.
"People as far south as
Los Angeles and as far north as Redding felt the quake," Gertz said.
Thursday, April 7, 2016
News Values
Timeliness
Afghan 'Sesame Street' Introduces Zari, a Muppet an Role Model for Girls
I believe that this article exhibits Timeliness because in recent events there have been many Islamic extremists who emphasize their views on women's rights. This new addition can help all young girls feel more empowered and spread the message of equality among races and genders.
http://www.nytimes.com/2016/04/12/world/asia/afghan-sesame-street-introduces-zari-a-muppet-and-role-model-for-girls.html?ref=world
Proximity
UT grapples with security worries in wake of slaying
In my opinion this article displays proximity because the closeness of the situation brings awareness amongst Austin residents. The campus is so close to most Austin residents that people want to read about the tragedy and understand all the components of the crime.
"Even as University of Texas administrators sought to calm an anxious campus after the death of Haruka Weiser, officials continue to grapple with a fundamental issue: striking a balance between the safety of a public university and public access to it."
Prominence
Impact-
Bangladesh Activist is Killed After Criticizing Militants
This article connects with reason number four, which is impact. The article is about a man who voiced his opinions and was punished for doing so. This impacts the audience and community because it creates fear, so that others will not go voice their perspectives.
Bangladesh Activist Is Killed After Criticizing Militants
http://www.nytimes.com/2016/04/08/world/asia/bangladesh-secular-activist-killed-nazim-uddin.html?ref=world&_r=0
Conflict
Human Interest
Novelty
Afghan 'Sesame Street' Introduces Zari, a Muppet an Role Model for Girls
I believe that this article exhibits Timeliness because in recent events there have been many Islamic extremists who emphasize their views on women's rights. This new addition can help all young girls feel more empowered and spread the message of equality among races and genders.
http://www.nytimes.com/2016/04/12/world/asia/afghan-sesame-street-introduces-zari-a-muppet-and-role-model-for-girls.html?ref=world
Proximity
UT grapples with security worries in wake of slaying
In my opinion this article displays proximity because the closeness of the situation brings awareness amongst Austin residents. The campus is so close to most Austin residents that people want to read about the tragedy and understand all the components of the crime.
"Even as University of Texas administrators sought to calm an anxious campus after the death of Haruka Weiser, officials continue to grapple with a fundamental issue: striking a balance between the safety of a public university and public access to it."
Prominence
New Evidence on When Bible Was Written: Ancient Shopping Lists
The discovery of the new Bible text is prominent in the Christian community and among history fanatics. It is very rare to find things like this, so the article will spark the interest of many who live all around the world and are in some way connected to the Bible.
http://www.nytimes.com/2016/04/12/world/middleeast/new-evidence-onwhen-bible-was-written-ancient-shopping-lists.html?ref=world
http://www.nytimes.com/2016/04/12/world/middleeast/new-evidence-onwhen-bible-was-written-ancient-shopping-lists.html?ref=world
Impact-
Bangladesh Activist is Killed After Criticizing Militants
This article connects with reason number four, which is impact. The article is about a man who voiced his opinions and was punished for doing so. This impacts the audience and community because it creates fear, so that others will not go voice their perspectives.
Bangladesh Activist Is Killed After Criticizing Militants
http://www.nytimes.com/2016/04/08/world/asia/bangladesh-secular-activist-killed-nazim-uddin.html?ref=world&_r=0
Conflict
A Murder Taps Into Germany’s Conflicted Relations With Migrants
The recent murder in Germany along with the terrorist attacks make conflicts with immigrants a bigger deal. The conflict present in this article is between the Germans and the Migrants, some of whom are becoming a bigger and bigger threat to societies. The conflict between the two is physical and ends up having emotional conflicts are a result of the physical.
Human Interest
Marine’s Death Shows a Quietly Expanding U.S. Role in Iraq
This article relates to human interest because lately there have been many terrorists attacks from the Middle East, so people are more prone to learn about this part of the world. The struggle and tensions that people in Iraq face will interest readers.
http://www.nytimes.com/2016/04/12/world/middleeast/marines-death-shows-a-quietly-expanding-us-role-in-iraq.html?ref=worldNovelty
Powerful Earthquake Strikes Pakistan, India and Afghanistan
A novelty is represented in this article because it is unusual for the South-East and Middle-East to get an earthquake. While it may have happened in the past, this disaster is not common. The casualties will interest the public because these counties are Third World and therefore will not have the best resources to help them recover.
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